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Author:  Kirra [ Fri Nov 18, 2011 11:29 am ]
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:)


Stathol is a genius.
He is Administrator.
The Glade looks awesome!


Haiku's for Glader's ;)

Author:  Stathol [ Fri Nov 18, 2011 11:36 am ]
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Cryptic elipses
What do you suppose he thinks?
Doombots incoming.

Author:  Khross [ Fri Nov 18, 2011 11:38 am ]
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<an obligatory winter for the morphology of haiku>

Author:  Kirra [ Fri Nov 18, 2011 11:39 am ]
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Haiku from Khross!! Yea! Come on!

Author:  TheRiov [ Fri Nov 18, 2011 11:51 am ]
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I settle for one of an alternate poetry style. And yes, I'm aware this isn't strictly following the rules for the style.


I set out to read from The Glade
seeking wise posts I hoped had been made.
But na'er a one did I find,
written with a sound mind.
So I bonked 'em all with my spade.

Author:  Kaffis Mark V [ Fri Nov 18, 2011 11:54 am ]
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Kirra wrote:
Haiku from Khross!! Yea! Come on!

He actually just gave us a pretty nifty one.

Author:  Kirra [ Fri Nov 18, 2011 11:56 am ]
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I'm confused...5-7-5...

Author:  Kaffis Mark V [ Fri Nov 18, 2011 11:57 am ]
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17 syllables, most commonly written in English as 5-7-5, is my understanding.

Author:  Stathol [ Fri Nov 18, 2011 12:05 pm ]
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There's not really a way to "translate" the haiku format to English because of fundamental differences in how the languages are written. 5-7-5 is just an approximation. My vague recollection is that in addition to the syntax issues, a true haiku is about nature, and the "turn" in the 3rd line is supposed to make you somehow reinterpret or reevaluate the first two lines.

Author:  Jeryn [ Fri Nov 18, 2011 12:11 pm ]
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thoughts like scattered leaves
coalesce into structure
if not to substance

Author:  Khross [ Fri Nov 18, 2011 12:13 pm ]
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Jeryn wrote:
thoughts like scattered leaves
coalesce into structure
if not to substance
No unintentionally plagiarizing Isse.

Author:  Kirra [ Fri Nov 18, 2011 12:13 pm ]
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Mine is like preschool haiku ;)

Author:  Jeryn [ Fri Nov 18, 2011 12:16 pm ]
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Khross wrote:
Jeryn wrote:
thoughts like scattered leaves
coalesce into structure
if not to substance
No unintentionally plagiarizing Isse.
Not to mention David Crosby :P

Author:  Stathol [ Fri Nov 18, 2011 1:10 pm ]
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What about Basho? Can I can plagiarize Basho?

Quote:
Do you blame Monet?
His gardens in Giverny
He captured
And lovely Basho
His plunking ponds and toads
Enraptured

The fate of Kurt Cobain
Junk coursing through his veins
And young Virginia Woolf
Death came and hung her coat

Love of color, sound and words
Is it a blessing or a curse?
Enraptured

Author:  Khross [ Fri Nov 18, 2011 1:12 pm ]
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Stathol wrote:
What about Basho? Can I can plagiarize Basho?
Signs point to ... everyone else has done it, but that still doesn't make it right.

Author:  Gilraen [ Fri Nov 18, 2011 1:20 pm ]
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To express one's thoughts
in seventeen syllables
is very diffic

Author:  Hopwin [ Fri Nov 18, 2011 1:56 pm ]
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Spoiler:
Image

Author:  Jeryn [ Fri Nov 18, 2011 4:01 pm ]
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Ah, would that I could
flash the bearded dude gang sign
Alas, I am shorn

First my daughter, now the Glade
I'll never escape
My Little Pony

Author:  Müs [ Fri Nov 18, 2011 4:16 pm ]
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Hopwin wrote:
Spoiler:
Image


Alas, old laptop
Repurposed into showing
Nothing but netflix

Is Twilight Sparkle
The only mane six pony
with four syllables

Author:  TheRiov [ Fri Nov 18, 2011 4:18 pm ]
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seriously? "mane"? or is that a deliberate pun?

Author:  Müs [ Fri Nov 18, 2011 4:37 pm ]
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Seriously. The six main characters are collectively known as "The Mane 6" :)

Author:  TheRiov [ Fri Nov 18, 2011 4:52 pm ]
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ugh. MLP scares me.

Author:  Stathol [ Fri Nov 18, 2011 5:20 pm ]
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Image

Author:  FarSky [ Fri Nov 18, 2011 5:27 pm ]
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Phe's a big MLP:FIM fan. I'm just enjoying watching the feigned discomfort it gives others. :D

Author:  Taamar [ Fri Nov 18, 2011 7:20 pm ]
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Apostrophes mean
posessive, not plural, yo.
Back to school for you!

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