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Author: | Kirra [ Fri Nov 18, 2011 11:29 am ] |
Post subject: | Glade Haiku's |
Stathol is a genius. He is Administrator. The Glade looks awesome! Haiku's for Glader's |
Author: | Stathol [ Fri Nov 18, 2011 11:36 am ] |
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Cryptic elipses What do you suppose he thinks? Doombots incoming. |
Author: | Khross [ Fri Nov 18, 2011 11:38 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: Glade Haiku's |
<an obligatory winter for the morphology of haiku> |
Author: | Kirra [ Fri Nov 18, 2011 11:39 am ] |
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Haiku from Khross!! Yea! Come on! |
Author: | TheRiov [ Fri Nov 18, 2011 11:51 am ] |
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I settle for one of an alternate poetry style. And yes, I'm aware this isn't strictly following the rules for the style. I set out to read from The Glade seeking wise posts I hoped had been made. But na'er a one did I find, written with a sound mind. So I bonked 'em all with my spade. |
Author: | Kaffis Mark V [ Fri Nov 18, 2011 11:54 am ] |
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Kirra wrote: Haiku from Khross!! Yea! Come on! He actually just gave us a pretty nifty one. |
Author: | Kirra [ Fri Nov 18, 2011 11:56 am ] |
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I'm confused...5-7-5... |
Author: | Kaffis Mark V [ Fri Nov 18, 2011 11:57 am ] |
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17 syllables, most commonly written in English as 5-7-5, is my understanding. |
Author: | Stathol [ Fri Nov 18, 2011 12:05 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Glade Haiku's |
There's not really a way to "translate" the haiku format to English because of fundamental differences in how the languages are written. 5-7-5 is just an approximation. My vague recollection is that in addition to the syntax issues, a true haiku is about nature, and the "turn" in the 3rd line is supposed to make you somehow reinterpret or reevaluate the first two lines. |
Author: | Jeryn [ Fri Nov 18, 2011 12:11 pm ] |
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thoughts like scattered leaves coalesce into structure if not to substance |
Author: | Khross [ Fri Nov 18, 2011 12:13 pm ] |
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Jeryn wrote: thoughts like scattered leaves No unintentionally plagiarizing Isse.
coalesce into structure if not to substance |
Author: | Kirra [ Fri Nov 18, 2011 12:13 pm ] |
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Mine is like preschool haiku |
Author: | Jeryn [ Fri Nov 18, 2011 12:16 pm ] |
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Khross wrote: Jeryn wrote: thoughts like scattered leaves No unintentionally plagiarizing Isse.coalesce into structure if not to substance |
Author: | Stathol [ Fri Nov 18, 2011 1:10 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Glade Haiku's |
What about Basho? Can I can plagiarize Basho? Quote: Do you blame Monet?
His gardens in Giverny He captured And lovely Basho His plunking ponds and toads Enraptured The fate of Kurt Cobain Junk coursing through his veins And young Virginia Woolf Death came and hung her coat Love of color, sound and words Is it a blessing or a curse? Enraptured |
Author: | Khross [ Fri Nov 18, 2011 1:12 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Glade Haiku's |
Stathol wrote: What about Basho? Can I can plagiarize Basho? Signs point to ... everyone else has done it, but that still doesn't make it right.
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Author: | Gilraen [ Fri Nov 18, 2011 1:20 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Glade Haiku's |
To express one's thoughts in seventeen syllables is very diffic |
Author: | Hopwin [ Fri Nov 18, 2011 1:56 pm ] |
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Spoiler: |
Author: | Jeryn [ Fri Nov 18, 2011 4:01 pm ] |
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Ah, would that I could flash the bearded dude gang sign Alas, I am shorn First my daughter, now the Glade I'll never escape My Little Pony |
Author: | Müs [ Fri Nov 18, 2011 4:16 pm ] |
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Hopwin wrote: Spoiler: Alas, old laptop Repurposed into showing Nothing but netflix Is Twilight Sparkle The only mane six pony with four syllables |
Author: | TheRiov [ Fri Nov 18, 2011 4:18 pm ] |
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seriously? "mane"? or is that a deliberate pun? |
Author: | Müs [ Fri Nov 18, 2011 4:37 pm ] |
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Seriously. The six main characters are collectively known as "The Mane 6" |
Author: | TheRiov [ Fri Nov 18, 2011 4:52 pm ] |
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ugh. MLP scares me. |
Author: | Stathol [ Fri Nov 18, 2011 5:20 pm ] |
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Author: | FarSky [ Fri Nov 18, 2011 5:27 pm ] |
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Phe's a big MLP:FIM fan. I'm just enjoying watching the feigned discomfort it gives others. |
Author: | Taamar [ Fri Nov 18, 2011 7:20 pm ] |
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Apostrophes mean posessive, not plural, yo. Back to school for you! |
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