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Author:  darksiege [ Tue Apr 09, 2013 12:09 pm ]
Post subject:  haiku

Hypolactasia
Pain in the pit of my belly
Now a broken wind

I write a Haiku
I am not very good yet
They are pretty bad

Why do you trick me?
Bioshock: Infinite game
You are a Mind ****

Author:  Gilraen [ Tue Apr 09, 2013 12:43 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: haiku

To express one's thoughts
In seventeen syllables
Is very diffic

Author:  Khross [ Tue Apr 09, 2013 4:24 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: haiku

Just a matter of course, the syllable count matters a lot less than the procedural elements when writing haiku in English.

Author:  Micheal [ Tue Apr 09, 2013 4:46 pm ]
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I prefer Waka.

Author:  Khross [ Tue Apr 09, 2013 5:17 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: haiku

Not sure why you would limit yourself to post-Heian tankas, Michael. Waka and kanshi are both fantastic genres though.

Author:  Micheal [ Tue Apr 09, 2013 9:43 pm ]
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Waka covers a lot of ground, tankas are just part of it. Haiku is too formalized to be much fun anymore.

For the most part, we Americans (including me) just don't get Japanese poetry, but from what I hear, they aren't real sure about Limericks.

Author:  Müs [ Tue Apr 09, 2013 9:49 pm ]
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Image

Tutanka?

Author:  Micheal [ Tue Apr 09, 2013 9:51 pm ]
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No but one of the forms does pair tanka together as question and answer.

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