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 Post subject: Glade Haiku's
PostPosted: Fri Nov 18, 2011 11:29 am 
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Stathol is a genius.
He is Administrator.
The Glade looks awesome!


Haiku's for Glader's ;)

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Cryptic elipses
What do you suppose he thinks?
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<an obligatory winter for the morphology of haiku>

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Haiku from Khross!! Yea! Come on!

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I settle for one of an alternate poetry style. And yes, I'm aware this isn't strictly following the rules for the style.


I set out to read from The Glade
seeking wise posts I hoped had been made.
But na'er a one did I find,
written with a sound mind.
So I bonked 'em all with my spade.


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Kirra wrote:
Haiku from Khross!! Yea! Come on!

He actually just gave us a pretty nifty one.

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I'm confused...5-7-5...

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17 syllables, most commonly written in English as 5-7-5, is my understanding.

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There's not really a way to "translate" the haiku format to English because of fundamental differences in how the languages are written. 5-7-5 is just an approximation. My vague recollection is that in addition to the syntax issues, a true haiku is about nature, and the "turn" in the 3rd line is supposed to make you somehow reinterpret or reevaluate the first two lines.

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thoughts like scattered leaves
coalesce into structure
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Jeryn wrote:
thoughts like scattered leaves
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if not to substance
No unintentionally plagiarizing Isse.

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Mine is like preschool haiku ;)

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Khross wrote:
Jeryn wrote:
thoughts like scattered leaves
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if not to substance
No unintentionally plagiarizing Isse.
Not to mention David Crosby :P


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What about Basho? Can I can plagiarize Basho?

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His gardens in Giverny
He captured
And lovely Basho
His plunking ponds and toads
Enraptured

The fate of Kurt Cobain
Junk coursing through his veins
And young Virginia Woolf
Death came and hung her coat

Love of color, sound and words
Is it a blessing or a curse?
Enraptured

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Stathol wrote:
What about Basho? Can I can plagiarize Basho?
Signs point to ... everyone else has done it, but that still doesn't make it right.

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To express one's thoughts
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Spoiler:
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Ah, would that I could
flash the bearded dude gang sign
Alas, I am shorn

First my daughter, now the Glade
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Alas, old laptop
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Nothing but netflix

Is Twilight Sparkle
The only mane six pony
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seriously? "mane"? or is that a deliberate pun?


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Seriously. The six main characters are collectively known as "The Mane 6" :)

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ugh. MLP scares me.


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Phe's a big MLP:FIM fan. I'm just enjoying watching the feigned discomfort it gives others. :D


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Apostrophes mean
posessive, not plural, yo.
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