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Screeling
PostPosted: Fri Oct 31, 2014 10:21 am 
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The schools I'm applying to typically have essay questions. I have a couple friends who have been gracious enough to edit my work, but I would like to give them a break. Does anybody have time and willingness to edit my essays? I'm really hoping for solid, honest critiques and not somebody to just say "it's good."

Thanks for any help!

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I'd be glad to, it may take me a couple of days to get to them though. Just PM them to me?

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Thanks much. I PM'ed them to you.

If anybody else is willing, I'd gladly accept more feedback.

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I'll proofread for you.

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I don't think I can help with the subject matter or the formatting, but I could probably find some time to question the way your parents raised you, if that would help.

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Sure, I would take a look, if you want to PM them to me. What kind of school? Undergrad? Graduate?

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Graduate, and possibly medical school

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Gotcha. Sure, cool, send 'em over. I've been to graduate school, and I fancy myself an editor and writer these days, so maybe I can help.

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Sent - and thanks.

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If you're still looking for someone I'd be happy to help.

It may take a couple of days though.
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Sorry it took so long, I've been a bit buried in lab work lately. Sent back to you with comments, looked pretty good generally.

If you want to send me a doc of the next draft via glade mail or email, I'll be glad to do some more specific structural edits.

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